The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The given diagrams illustrate the process that is used to produce cement, and show how people use it to make concrete for purposes relating to building.
Overall, there are five distinct stages in the production of cement, and there is only one step in that of concrete. The process of manufacturing cement commences with the missing of materials and ends at the packing stage.
Limestone is one of the two ingredients that are used in the production of cement, along with clay. All two raw ingredients are first crushed in a crushing machine. The crushed powder then undergoes a blending phase machine in a mixer, after which the mixture is passed through a rotating heater to create liquid cement. Following this, liquid the substance is transferred to a grinder which is used to grind it into the powder of cement. Finally, the powder is packed in yellow receptacles for cement.
Looking at the process of making concrete, gravel makes up 50% of the ingredients that is used to manufacture concrete, along with a quarter of
sand, 15% cement and 10% water. All ingredients are put in a cyclindrical mixer and rotated until concrete is made.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89743589744 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71310647516 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5032875232 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425807747941 0.215688989381 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162655208291 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161746639097 0.0843802449381 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244759006952 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187855477615 0.0819641961636 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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