The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagrams illustrate the way the wave power is converted into electricity by a specialized structure.
Overall, it can be seen that the movements of the waves are the main drive of producing electricity. Moreover, the apparatus which needs to be built on the sea wall has three main components and all of them have a crucial contribution to the given process.
Looking at the details, the air inside the chamber which is situated offshore is pushed up by the wave's motion towards a narrow column that is constructed exactly on the cliff. The air' movement inside the column applies a force on the inner turbine, leading to its unidirectional rotation. When the wave goes back, the process is reversed with the air flowing in the opposite direction, but imprinting on the turbine a rotation in the same direction.
Finally, the turbine's spinning generates energy and this is used for household practices.

Votes
Average: 5.1 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, moreover

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99346405229 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84509736355 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653594771242 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4798283324 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.142857143 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128058465431 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579859316681 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508653067005 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848282835324 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487175240415 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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