Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries many small local businesses are unable to compete some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities To what extend do you agree

Supermarkets are increasing in some region with which little shops found it unbeatable. Some believe that local communities will be disappear if small shops stop serving. I completely support this point of view for some reasons.

To begin with, small business are bearing the symbol of one's tradition and if it get closed, our tradition will fall in danger. To illustrate, little shops in any locality contains mostly the local items which is a part of that tradition. If this business is being closed, and a supermarket build instead there will not be any sign of local tradition remained. Therefore, the tradition will be forgotten and digitalization would take place of this. Furthermore, there will no uniqueness across one country or even world. Provided that, every cities are having super shops and there is not a single small shop around, this shop will sell standard products which is almost similar all across the country. For example, in my city, Sylhet, have three super shop, when i visited Dhaka which is more than 200 miles away, I noticed that almost all items are available in Dhaka's supermarket. Based on this, we can easily imagine that there will be no differences among the cities.

However, super shops also bear some advantages that should not be ignored. Firstly, its provide products after collecting from various nations which is impossible for small shops. Agora, a super shop in my area, for instance, serve some baby foods that is not available in the small shops. In addition, the super shop have their return policy which is also a great facility. As a result, we can receive its of foreign products and if damage we can return them.

In conclusion, the importance of supermarkets cannot be denied, but to keep our tradition safe, and manage a uniqueness amongst regions, we should care about small business.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 965.302439024 160% => OK
No of words: 309.0 196.424390244 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98381877023 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58077578269 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 106.607317073 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 283.868780488 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1506798105 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5882352941 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180294222358 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066971135469 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628831558319 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117206570942 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671145520107 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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