Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health.

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Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)
Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health.

Submitted by suykaaa on Wed, 10/10/2018 - 02:05

The line graph shows the information about acidity from eating sweet foods, which causes the decay of tooth when people eat. While the acid level is depicted along a vertical axis by pH level, the time frame is placed on horizontal. Overall, after 35 minutes all of the 3 features, fruit sugar, cane sugar and honey reaches at their peak
According to the line graph, Blue, honey, is at 7 pH level at the moment of eating. Then it starts to fall to just under 5 for first 5 minutes and remains at the same level for the next 5 minutes. After this, it rises dramatically back to 7 in just 15 minutes, which lasts for rest of minutes. Both green and red ones have nearly similar features. Figure for fruit sugar, similarly, declines in first 5 minutes, but increases back immediately, which means it improves from 4.3 to 5 between 5 and 10 minutes. Then reaches its peak and it lasts for around 5 minutes.
Compared to the other 2 rates, green is the least one. Likewise red and blue, it goes down for first 5 minutes. Before it peaks at 7 by the time of 40 minutes, it shows gradually rise for 35 minutes from 3.5 pH level.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...n horizontal. Overall, after 35 minutes all of the 3 features, fruit sugar, cane sugar and...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
... other 2 rates, green is the least one. Likewise red and blue, it goes down for first 5 ...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, likewise, similarly, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35714285714 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31248705334 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0623227005 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1818181818 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179518817607 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720062732344 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789107593241 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135860278735 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792319140999 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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