Essay topics: The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005.

Essay topics: Essay topics: The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005.

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This bar chart illustrate the usage of car by men and women for this eight different purpose (courses, visiting town, bank, running errands, visiting friends, recreation, work and shopping) .
as you can see the most usage of the car for both men and women is work and the least usage of car by men is running errands and for women is visiting town.
almost in other purpose women use their car more than men by almost %50 except for recreation. the men use their car almost over %50 then women for recreation. over %50 of men use their car for work trips and women almost %40.
further more women use their car almost %50 more for shopping, visiting friend than men and over %60 use their car for running errands and bank over men. the men use their car more significantly than women for visiting town women %1 and men almost %10

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g friends, recreation, work and shopping . as you can see the most usage of the ...
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Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...friends, recreation, work and shopping . as you can see the most usage of the c...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...nds, recreation, work and shopping . as you can see the most usage of the car f...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Almost
...rrands and for women is visiting town. almost in other purpose women use their car mo...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...en by almost %50 except for recreation. the men use their car almost over %50 then ...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Over
...ost over %50 then women for recreation. over %50 of men use their car for work trips...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Further
...r for work trips and women almost %40. further more women use their car almost %50 mor...
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Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... for running errands and bank over men. the men use their car more significantly th...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 679.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46710526316 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11233498186 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 61.0 106.607317073 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.401315789474 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.718749782 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0760661455288 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553105505939 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212622551269 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614758960553 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158050542818 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.82 8.06136585366 72% => OK
difficult_words: 11.0 40.7170731707 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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