Movies do more than just entertaining people, they reflected a picture of the country they have been made in. Watching movies will give us a sense of the culture of people, their lifestyle, relationships and more important values.
The very first thing people will learn about another country, watching its movies, is the people lifestyle. Most of the movies I have seen so far were American. For example, I have watched Freinds tv series, and I found out
what do American's relationship with families and friends look like, and what makes people laugh. In the U.S.A when someone reaches the adolescent age, he or she usually separate from his or her parents. And before marriage, a couple usually have been dating for several years. Also, large families are often rare, couples at most have two children.
The most important values of a people reflect in their movies. For example, I have watched Lincoln movie, which the values that the American society esteems, such as democracy, liberty, and nationalism, has been enlightened in it.
At the end of the day, learning about other people, through movies, has never been enough. It deserves precise researches on its history and culture. Moreover, the cinema industry is significantly under influence of financial issues. Therefore a poor country despite its esteem people and existence of high values in its culture, cannot present its reality, due to its poor economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10256410256 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57963953717 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645299145299 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2700331696 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2857142857 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229426785572 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681171638125 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496806817354 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119320616274 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521167141167 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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