Whether lands need to be left in its natural condition or used for housing and industry, is a controversial issue.
Although countries are racing to develop their industry and empower their economy, environmentalists warned about the future of our
planet, if we keep continuing this way. The country, where I live, is almost wide with a tropical climate, and there are a few flourishing regions.Therefore, the vast majority are interested to have villas in these regions. Hence, the government and people need to undertake a policy to control the amount of housing in these regions, to maintain a better country for our generation and for generations to come.
There is a broad consensus on the necessity of protecting the environment from human activities. And my people are not an exception. The huge amount of hosing is damaging the nature. And the needs of national will to control this situation is ever increasing. Most of the flourishing and green region, without any consideration from the government, is now occupied by tall buildings and lots of villas. Moreover, huge contamination that is caused by increasing population has damaged these regions.
Wherever humans enter they caused pollution and disaster together. there is a famous quote from a scientist that said if all the insects were to disappear from the world, within 50 years all sorts of life will ruin, and if all the humans were to disappear all kind of life will be flourished. And that is a sad fact.
All in all, the whole world needs to rethink their approach toward the environment. We cannot afford to continue this way. We must view it as more than just some sort of resource and stop racing in overusing it. We need to keep balance. Although developing the industry and housing is ameliorating our lives, leaving some part of the environment in its natural condition must be taken seriously.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...and there are a few flourishing regions.Therefore, the vast majority are interested to ha...
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Line 8, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...caused pollution and disaster together. there is a famous quote from a scientist that...
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Line 10, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...source and stop racing in overusing it. We need to keep balance. Although developi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00317460317 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93087232708 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568253968254 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.0971435816 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5555555556 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228078427636 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611236574125 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107016867557 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134098486529 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149957961324 0.0645574589148 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.