Whether childhood is the most important term in everyone's life is a never-ending debate. The people who are in favor of this argument, bring up the fact that our character is shaped in the childhood, in supporting their opinion. While some believe adolescence is the most crucial period of everyone's life. And, adolescence is the time that our future path will be determined.
All the successful individuals have a sort of common personality. These people never give up in face of desperate situations, they learn from their mistakes and after any failure, they start over. If examined precisely, the roots of such a strong character would be found in their childhood. Moreover, studies have shown that people's personality shaped in the very young ages. And, the majority believe that it is our characteristics that determined the quality of our life. For example, if someone is perseverance, that person will work hard to achieve their dreams even if it needs arduous trying. Therefore, the most vital term in our life would be our childhood.
Some view adolescence as the most impactful term of life. Since, it is the time we go for study in the university, start a career and maybe start a family, therefore, it is certainly the time of our most critical decisions. If we do great in the adolescence, our future happiness will be guaranteed. Literally, adolescence is the time of investment for the future, if individuals invest wisely, they would gain a good profit. Thus adolescence is way more important than the childhood years.
At the end of the day, I believe there is no affirmative answer to this argument. In different cases, it can be either right or wrong. Some owe their success to their childhood years while other may owe it to their brilliant performance in their adolescence. Since people are different it is not reasonable to extrapolated examples to whole cases. Hence in my opinion dependent on the people, the childhood years could either be the most important term of their life or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.48453608247 281% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 937.175257732 179% => OK
No of words: 338.0 206.0 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95266272189 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8799127196 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51775147929 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 290.88556701 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0042788357 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7142857143 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0952380952 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167414906683 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495581534747 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374724823655 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10383186333 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217398392931 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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