The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use

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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first chart provides information about each Australia household’s average energy consumption and the second chart illustrates the percentages of greenhouse emission from the use of energy.

Overall, heating is the most significant energy consumption of Australia, while every Aussie household used the least energy on the cooling system. In relation, water heating is the largest greenhouse gas emissions and the lowest emissions were made by cooling used.

To be more precise, the heating system accounted for 42% of energy consumption in Australia and just under a third of the en...

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Average: 8.6 (8 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, third, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47572815534 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12072499558 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495145631068 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6706130447 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354892226844 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154883302241 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965835327911 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244236479693 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930188003464 0.0819641961636 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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