the first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts above presented details of Australian household energy consumption and greenhouse gas emissions respectively.
The first pie chart shows the percentage of different sources of energy use. Namely, water heating, heating, refrigeration, cooling, lighting, and other appliances. Among them, heating and water heating complies of 42% and 30%, which jointly constitute over 70% of the total energy consumption. In contrast, refrigerator, cooling and lighting make 7%, 2% and 4% respectively. The rest proportion is represented by other appliances, with around 15%.
The second chart presents the greenhouse gas emissions by consumed different energy sources shown in first chart. Likewise, water heating generated largest part of greenhouse gas, with 32% of total emissions. Followed by other appliances, 28%; heating, 15%; refrigeration, 14%. The rest of gas emissions is contributed by lighting 8% and 3% for cooling.
To summarize, over 70% of energy consumption from Australian household is for heating and water heating. However, these two items only contribute roughly 47% of total greenhouse gas. Meanwhile, 42% greenhouse gas is generated by other appliances and refrigeration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'generated the largest'.
Suggestion: generated the largest
...in first chart. Likewise, water heating generated largest part of greenhouse gas, with 32% of tot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, likewise, second, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85795454545 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17156932992 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.6082943445 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.3076923077 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281109614885 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103718533323 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111536119304 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193760253076 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444083855957 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 11.4140731707 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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