The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two charts provide information of average Australian household’s energy usage and the consumers’ gas emission.
At first glance, heating sector have most energy usage, standing at 42%, but it’s exhausting fume is a mere at 15%, only sector that has an inverse correlation. Water heating and cooling represent approximately at 30% and 2% respectively. Then their gas emissions are accounting for 32% and 3%- only minor increases.
On the other hand, other appliances and refrigeration form around 15% and 7% of the first figure while in the second chart they form 28% and 14% each of them- their portions doubled compared to their usage. And final sector is lighting which discharge 8% of gas emission, but lighting’s electricity usage amount is around at 4%.
To sum up, expect from heating, other parts’ gas emission’s portions are larger than energy usage’s portion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, then, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46853146853 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21203663182 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713286713287 0.547539520022 130% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5589627003 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169876893218 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077356248118 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626925860806 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115149728597 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592848135962 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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