The first pie chart illstrate the precentage of household energy used in Australian. Meanwhile, the next pie chart shows the rate of greenhouse gas emissions used for Australia inhabtants.
Overall, the biggest usage of energy for Australian is heating. Also, water heating and other appliances have top emissions which created by gas in Australian household.
As for energy use, heating run almost half energy, and become the largest applications for residents who live in Austrulia. Likewise water heating can not be ignored, that spend 30% energy in an average family, as well as other appliances,take 15%. Refrigeration, lighting and cooling are light proporgations compare with the sum power(7%, 4%, 2%, respectively).
Concerning the emissions, water heating as same as other appliances,and these are emit 60% clean gas totally for a whole family in Australia. Different between the first chart, the greenhouse gas emissions which created from heating only occuping 15%, which is equal to refrigeration's emissions. Lighting and cooling have tiny rates in sum.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , take
...rage family, as well as other appliances,take 15%. Refrigeration, lighting and coolin...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'emitted'.
Suggestion: emitted
... same as other appliances,and these are emit 60% clean gas totally for a whole famil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, likewise, so, well, while, as for, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54268292683 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04523574418 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65243902439 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0170267202 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294219986436 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120647447744 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105327167092 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194907560778 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111010411758 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.