The first chart demonstrates the average household energy consumption in Australia and the second chart illustrates the greenhouse gas emissions in the Australian household. Overall it is clear that Australian household energy use is higher in terms of heating process and greenhouse emissions are in water heating.
In Addition, Australian household energy consumption is divided into 6 sections, heating, water heating, refrigeration, cooling, lighting and other appliances and in terms of percentage it is rated as 42 percent for heating, 30 percent for water heating, 4 and 2 percent for lighting and cooling, 7 percent for refrigeration lastly 15 percent for other appliances.
In Contrast, Greenhouse emissions having comparatively same 6 sections of different rating and having higher emissions in terms of water heating at 32 percent and which is rated 30 percent in energy consumption, and almost common cooling rate about 3 percent whereas refrigeration, cooling, heating and other appliances are rated at 14, 15, 8 and 28 percent respectively.
Therefore, The energy consumption in Australian household for heating is at higher percentage of 42 as compared to emission which is higher for water heating at 32 percent respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r heating, 30 percent for water heating, 4 and 2 percent for lighting and cooling...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, second, therefore, whereas, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58421052632 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22931945696 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442105263158 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8558961704 43.030603864 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.2 112.824112599 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 22.9334400587 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2 5.23603664747 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186070541707 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164835922471 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128014133157 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154985901424 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143954799353 0.0819641961636 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.2329268293 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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