The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Essay topics:

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The pie chart illustrates energy use while the second pie chart describes the greenhouse gas emissions of this energy use in an average Australian's household.

Overall, mainly the energy is spent on heating, this activity contributes to the largest proportion of greenhouse gas emissions, in fact, water heating. The cooling comprises the least part of the energy use and greenhouse gas emissions in the household of Australian.

The proportion of energy use and gas emissions are approximately the same for the water heating (30% and 32% respectively) and the cooling (2% and 3% respectively). Despite that heating comprises nearly half of total energy use, only 15% of this power emit the gas.

However, the greenhouse gas emissions from the other power resources increase by twice using these energies, such as refrigeration (14% and 7% respectively), lighting (8% and 4% respectively) and other appliances (28% and 15% respectively) in an average australian‘s household.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, second, so, while, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46710526316 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22520774954 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559210526316 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4931165915 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478800557783 0.215688989381 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.261330532196 0.103423049105 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137376159476 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314489663957 0.15604864568 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125972735742 0.0819641961636 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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