The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The two pie charts respectively illustrate the amount of energy use and greenhouse gas emissions in a typical Australian house, broken down into 6 categories: heating, water heating, cooling, refrigeration, other appliances.
According to the first chart, heating uses the largest amount of energy among the others, accounting for nearly 50%. As they can be seen on the chart, water heating and other appliances considerably consume energy, approximately 30% and 15%. Also, the difference between how energy is used in refrigeration and lighting is not too big, about 3%. By contrast, cooling consumes the least energy just only at around 2%.
It is water heating that generates the most greenhouse gas emissions, with an approximate percentage of 32% and followed by 28% of other appliances. With just 1% less, there is a slight difference in percentage of greenhouse gas emissions from heating and refrigeration. Lastly, cooling and lighting generate the least, just under 10%.
We can see a similarity between heating, water heating and other appliances. All of them both consume the most energy and generate the most greenhouse gas emissions. As for cooling and lighting, they don't change in the two pie charts, they all have the lowest percentages of energy use and greenhouse gas emissions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30917874396 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9740725003 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56038647343 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9364680322 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9090909091 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268674306606 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103394825608 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07053288396 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171399985315 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523270420071 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.