The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.
The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
You should write at least 150 words.
The first table chart gives information about the overcome of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100000 United Kingdom residents who were asked if they visited abroad and the reason for their traveled from 1994 to 1998. The next line graph reveals the change in the location where people visited over the same period.
Overall, it is crystal clear that the number of United Kingdom people traveled abroad in 1998 was always the highest number for all reason. Looking at the second chart, in 1998, Western Europe had the largest number which people visited.
First of all, the first table, there was a slightly increased in the number of people visited on holiday over the period from 15.246 in 1994 to 20,700 in 1998. The purpose of people traveled with other reasons without holiday, business and visits to friend and relatives in 1997 was higher than other years.
About the second chart, the data of the destination people visited both Western Europe, North America and other areas in 1998 was always bigger than other years. Similarly, how many United Kingdom residents traveled other areas from 1996 to 1998 was the same level, at 2500 respectively. By contrast, the number in 1995 was the lowest point, comparied with the number of other years. Nearly 25000 reached a peak in the number of people visited Western Europe .
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 459, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... number of people visited Western Europe .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, similarly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94247787611 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20335671262 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526548672566 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0518727288 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.7 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240916653955 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101812350126 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837928195961 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17339914733 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106131799893 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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