the flow chart below show the procedure to get the driving license in US

The diagram illustrates the proceedings to take a driving license in the US. In general, those who need the legal right to drive have to overcome one test and two exams and because of those, there are different scenarios by which a person can take the driving licence.
Firstly, the candidates have to fill in the forms at the driving licence centre before taking an eyesight test. If a person passes this visual ability test, he or she will progress to the next steps. Otherwise, there is no chance he or she gets the licence. Overcoming the eyesight test, the candidates will have to pay a fee and after that, they will face a written exam.
If the licence takers fail the written exam, they ought to resit the exam until passing it. However, a notice is that they will have to repeatedly pay the fee every third time they fail this exam.
The final exam is taken place on the road. The candidates can not get the driving license unless he or she passes the road exam. Unlike the written examination, anytime the candidates retake this real circumstance exam, they are charged the fee one more time.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, third, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58080808081 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3257397536 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8572787416 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4545454545 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104478332674 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545426542412 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779098586338 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717687922775 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580363594339 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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