the flow chart below show the procedure to get the driving license in US

Essay topics:

the flow chart below show the procedure to get the driving license in US

The given chart illustrates the getting driving license’s process in America.
Overall there are seven stages to pass the driving exams while several processes are implemented to retake type of exams in case drivers are failed in some stages
To begin, drivers has to emerge in driving license center on time to full in the application forms. After that, a test was set to test the eyesight’s level of participants to make sure they are satisfied the expectations of the center. If they are not qualified, there is no chance for them to have a license while the people who passed this test would pay fees to participate in the first exam which is written exam.
There are two cases which are drivers pass this type of exam or not. In the first case, after finishing the written exam, drivers would do the road exam and this is final stage to get the driving licences. However, some people who might fail in driving test have to pay money to retake the written exam and start these processes again. In the second case, participants have not to pay fees compared to the stage which is after they failed the road exam but immediately retake the written exam. They have two time to conquer this test. If drivers fail, they has to pay money to take one more time while people who passed go straight ahead to road exam.
All of this process is smooth circulation and repetition to ensure the participants will get the driving license in case they tried and qualified all demands.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (48 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 558, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...onquer this test. If drivers fail, they has to pay money to take one more time whil...
^^^
Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e they tried and qualified all demands.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, while, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 263.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66539923954 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44753533959 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45247148289 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3969792162 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.545454545 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110805061002 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609495008951 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838998711902 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111951216711 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942363345643 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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