the chart below shows the annual pay ( thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004
The given chart illustrates the amount of payment that doctors and other workers were paid in several countries in 2004.
Overall, while doctors’s salary was higher than that of other workers in both seven countries, US workers and doctors earned more than others.
It is obviously seen that the annual pay of US doctors was the highest at approximately 120 thousands of dollars compared to that of Finland doctors with nearly 50 thousands of dollars which was the lowest pay. The following of doctor’s salary in US were France and Switzerland with similar figures, about over 65 thousand dollars. At the same time, doctors in Italy, Germany Czech Republic earned around 60 thousand dollars.
In term of other workers, the annual pay for these people in Italy, Czech Republic and Germany witnessed the same number which were 20 thousands USD. The other workers’salary in Finland was slightly higher than these figures by about 5 thousands USD while pay of workers in Switzerland doubled to these figures,reaching to 40 thousand dollars. Besides, The US workers earned highest money which was nearly 45 thousands of dollars.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '120 thousand'.
Suggestion: 120 thousand
...octors was the highest at approximately 120 thousands of dollars compared to that of Finland doc...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '50 thousand'.
Suggestion: 50 thousand
... to that of Finland doctors with nearly 50 thousands of dollars which was the lowest pay. The ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...land doctors with nearly 50 thousands of dollars which was the lowest pay. The fo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple in Italy, Czech Republic and Germany witnessed the same number which were 20 ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , reaching
... in Switzerland doubled to these figures,reaching to 40 thousand dollars. Besides, The US...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '45 thousand'.
Suggestion: 45 thousand
...s earned highest money which was nearly 45 thousands of dollars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87647389687 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505434782609 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.266269057 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409407607566 0.215688989381 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179005263285 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713064218461 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249894947317 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211212059521 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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