people’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Shopping is an essential part in human life. While many people argue that the determine factor affecting on shopping habit is consumers’s age, I am of the opinion that other factors is equally important.
On the one hand, it is believed that age group exerts a more significant effect on people’s shopping habit than other factors. The main reasons is the difference in lifestyle of people in variety of age groups lead to contrasting demands. For example, old people tend to read newspapers and traditional books compared with digital books and articles were chose by youngsters. As a result, different products have consumed by youngsters and elders. Another convincing reason is the advanced of technology which has resulted in the changes in shopping habit of young people. To be more specific, these people who get used to using Internet and digital devices are more likely to stick to shopping online because it is a fast and convenient way to shopping. However, older generations might feel unfamiliar with these devices then choosing shopping in traditional ways.
On the other hand, i am convinced that besides age group, there are equally essential factors when considering shopping habit. First of all, the quality and quantity of products in the local areas play a role in locals’s shopping styles. It was proven that majority of people who refused using Internet goods because online marketers have usually exaggerated the features of these goods. It lead to the buyers’s hesitation when shopping online. Second, the discount policies of store and restaurants are beneficial for the selling conditions. To be more specific, the likelihood of these stores and restaurants attracts more customers than others in local areas. in fact, even tourists are attracted by discounts when they are visiting a new destination.
In conclusions, although advocates argue that the age groups has affected to people’s shopping habit, I firmly believe that the habit of consumers equally depends on other factors such as the quantity and quality of products and the discount policy of sellers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, second, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29080118694 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87935679003 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537091988131 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0375182966 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.882352941 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338002989154 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104783550414 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101100313182 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219559463545 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030390896093 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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