The above figure provides the information about how pencils are made. There are mainly two stages used for preparing pencils from raw material. The two stages are of pencil leads and pencil cases.
Primarily focusing on the pencil leads, the main ingredient used for this process is graphite dough which is obtained from mixture of ground graphite, clay, and H2O. After that this graphite dough is processed in forming press to produce the graphite rod which is further cut down in particular length of pencil size and then dried in oven on temperature of 800c.Further this dried leads are used in making of pencil.
As far as pencil leads are made then the next process comes is making of pencil cases. This process consists of tree wood which is obtained from trees. Then this wood is processed and cut into the shape of the wooden slat. Furthermore, the leads and sandwiched with wooden slat using glue.
Finally, the pencils are finished using shaping machine and we get the finished pencils.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... and water scientifically known as h2o. when we mix this contents together a dough o...
^^^^
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the start they are put into an oven at a 800 degree c so that they become hard a...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21759259259 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94510019807 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532407407407 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5121576878 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.142857143 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0570523515356 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327361188811 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245753541262 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0374641319528 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127229303794 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.79 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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