The given diagram illustrates the possible way of the process of home energy production

Essay topics:

The given diagram illustrates the possible way of the process of home energy production.

Overall, the home energy production process includes 7 steps which can be grouped into two stages: artificial and machinery stage.
In terms of artificial stage, people can firstly mix the leaves, food scraps and other similar organic things, and then put them in a steel tank filled with three quarters. After a certain time, methane gas are fermented by the compost. After taking out the gas though the gas pipe, the gas is stored into the methane gas storage.
As far as the machinery stage is concerned, the methane gas was compressed from the compressor to the combustion engine by the compressor. After which the mechanical energy is generated by the combustion engine, then transfer the mechanical energy to the generator by the mechanical parts. When the generator receives the mechanical energy, it can produce the electrical energy. Following this, the electrical energy is transferred to the battery though the electrical wire, it can be stored and prepared for home use.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66283658179 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2233016379 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102291907957 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447242086162 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669321360309 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091256981944 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811249286988 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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