We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers They are used in business hospitals crime detection and even to fly planes What things will they be used for in the future Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious for

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious for their benefits?

Electronic devices, influence our lives, having various applications in the different industries. For the future, using computers can improve our lives. However, we cannot ignore the negative impacts on it.

A fundamental reason is that communication with others becomes more convenient in the future, since we can send instant messages to our working associates and friends through phone applications such as Facebook, Instagram and WhatsApp. For instance in Hong Kong, working people are preferred to use phone messengers rather than deliver the information through the traditional ways likes emails, phone conversations and mails. Moreover, for storing the significant data, technology of cloud is extremely useful. People can download the information everywhere when you are connected with internet. Consequently, computers improve our daily lives.

However, when people spend massive time on electronic devices, they would be addicted on that. An intensive research by Oxford university indicates that 90 percent young people in London tend to interact with their family members and friends by using smart phone applications, it results in lesser the face to face communication. This is largely because they are attracted by the games on their electronic games on phones. Actually, students are recommended to spend more quality time with their families. Thus, it causes distancing between people, it is opposed by the positive impacts on that.

To conclude, despite having constructive outcomes in using computers, the destructive outcomes cannot be ignored.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Intensive research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76394849785 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93898359383 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622317596567 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.2384716721 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9285714286 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168141438934 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546330722274 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454541969395 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971610264414 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158020779963 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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