Global environmental issues are responsibility of rich nations not poor nations
In 21st century people face inevitable environmental problems and sustainability of our eco-system is questioned. Humans have materialized everything. Some think that all countries and each individual is responsible to preserve nature . I think that it is the liability of rich countries to tackle environment problems.
To start with, burning fossil fuels releases gases and chemicals into the air . overpopulated countries suffer from greed locks and traffic jams that are major reasons for air contamination. Also, factories in wealthy countries pollute air with co2 and contaminate waters with chemical leftovers. The best example is china, where is located the most of the factories. Researches show, that every tenth person in china has chronic bronchitis.
Another problematic issue is deforestation that causes natural disasters, like landfalls, floods, draught and famine, extinction of rare species, etc. Geologists say, that after that big deforestation in north America, landslide s frequency has increased by 86 percent and killed a lot of people.
To conclude, the environmental problems are hotly debated issues and habitats of the whole world should be involved in tackling the problem but I strongly believe that the role of rich countries is far more important in this process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, i think, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65482233503 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09785851119 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.715736040609 0.547539520022 131% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1375620071 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0913358791481 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263213045038 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343073880174 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556126057808 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428522970723 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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