Global environmental issues are responsibility of rich nations not poor nations
In 21st century people are rapidly destroying the planet that we rely on to survive. While some believe it is the responsibility of nation who have gained their prosperity through exploiting the environment, it seems that all countries must play a role because there is only one Earth that we share.
Firstly , the process of industrialization produced huge amounts of pollution as well as deforestation and the extinction of numerous plant and animal species.
Furthermore, according to agriculture organization, an estimated 7mln ha of forest are lost each year that leads to draught, soil erosion, air contamination and food limitation. So I strongly believe that these countries should be the first to provide funding for environmental protection as their wealth comes from destroying what we all depend on.
Considered all, humanity face the risk when the earth can no longer support us. At the same time, richer nations are the ones that have the most power, so they must lead the way in preserving the environment for everyone.
- With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging Face to face communication will become a thing of the past 84
- Global environmental issues are responsibility of rich nations not poor nations 78
- Global environmental issues are responsibility of rich nations not poor nations 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...only one Earth that we share. Firstly , the process of industrialization produc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24404761905 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05964653587 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.738095238095 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8813910079 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.857142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106761504666 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039633222986 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564093022232 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552261229967 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049101288095 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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