GOVERNMANT SHOULD SPEND MONEY ON RAILWAYS RATHER THAN ON ROAD.
TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
THE RAILWAYS ARE THE CHEAPEST ,EASIEST FORM OF TRANSPORT IN OUR SOCIETY. ROADS ARE COMFORTABLE ONLY WHEN THE JOURNEY IS SHORT. RAILWAYS MUST BE THE PRIMARY FUND FOR GOVERNMENT THAN ON ROADS. THIS ESSAY WILL ARGUE WHY GOVERNMENT EXPENDITURE MUST CONSIDER RAILWAYS FIRST RATHER THEN ROADS.
BUSES, CARS, BICYCLES AND SO ON ARE THE COMMON ROAD TRANSPORTS. THE PUBLIC TRANSPORTS ARE THE DAILY FORM OF COMMUTE FOR WORKING PEOPLE IS INEVITABLE. CERTAINLY ,TOURIST FROM VARIES PLACES PREFER BUSES OR COACH TO ADORE THE VIEWS AND SPEND NUMEROUS TIME ON SITE SEEING. A RECENT STUDY ON ROAD TRANSPORT SHOWED; 80%OF VIEWERS OR NATURE LOVERS PREFERABLE MODE OF TRANSPORT IS BY ROAD WHERE AS ONLY 20% TAKES RAILWAYS. DESPITE OF TOURIST POPULATION, REST REQUIRE RAILWAYS TO REACH THE DESIRED PLACE ON TIME.
TRAIN IS THE FASTEST TRANSPORT NEXT TO AIR. MOST OF THE MIDDLE CLASS POPULATION AND LONG DISTANCE TRAVELERS CHOOSE TRAIN TRAVEL SINCE IT IS COMFORTABLE AND AFFORDABLE. THE SIGNIFICANT POINT ON RAILWAYS IS IT DOES NOT HAVE ANY TRAFFIC LIKE ROAD, SO THIS WILL BE TIME SAVING FOR THEM. FOR EXAMPLE A RECENT SURVEY CONDUCTED ON ESSENTIAL METHOD OF TRANSPORT,RAILWAYS WAS SELECTED APPROXIMATELY BY 200 THOUSAND PEOPLE TO BE THE MOST NEEDED COMMUTE ,TO REACH THE DESTINATION ON TIME WITHOUT WARY. WITH THE BOLSTERED SURVEY, PEOPLE SELECT RAILWAYS FOR SAFE AND HAPPY VOYAGE RATHER THAN ROAD. HENCE GOVERNMENT FUNDING MUST BE MORE TOWARDS THE PEOPLE PREFERENCE .
HEREBY I CONCLUDE THIS ESSAY BY PRECISING GOVERNMENT FINANCE TOWARDS RAILWAYS MUST BE MORE THAN ON ROAD. I STRONGLY SUPPORT PEOPLE NEEDS MUST BE PRIORITIZED PRIMARILY.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
THE RAILWAYS ARE THE CHEAPEST ,EASIEST FORM OF TRANSPORT IN OUR SOCIETY...
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Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: Than
...URE MUST CONSIDER RAILWAYS FIRST RATHER THEN ROADS. BUSES, CARS, BICYCLES AND SO ...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...DAILY FORM OF COMMUTE FOR WORKING PEOPLE IS INEVITABLE. CERTAINLY ,TOURIST FROM V...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...WORKING PEOPLE IS INEVITABLE. CERTAINLY ,TOURIST FROM VARIES PLACES PREFER BUSES ...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'WHEREAS'?
Suggestion: WHEREAS
...PREFERABLE MODE OF TRANSPORT IS BY ROAD WHERE AS ONLY 20% TAKES RAILWAYS. DESPITE OF TOU...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to train'
Suggestion: To train
...TION AND LONG DISTANCE TRAVELERS CHOOSE TRAIN TRAVEL SINCE IT IS COMFORTABLE AND AFFO...
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , RAILWAYS
...NDUCTED ON ESSENTIAL METHOD OF TRANSPORT,RAILWAYS WAS SELECTED APPROXIMATELY BY 200 THOUS...
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Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...AND PEOPLE TO BE THE MOST NEEDED COMMUTE ,TO REACH THE DESTINATION ON TIME WITHOUT...
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Line 5, column 586, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: HENCE,
...SAFE AND HAPPY VOYAGE RATHER THAN ROAD. HENCE GOVERNMENT FUNDING MUST BE MORE TOWARDS...
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Line 5, column 653, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ST BE MORE TOWARDS THE PEOPLE PREFERENCE . HEREBY I CONCLUDE THIS ESSAY BY PREC...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24427480916 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7088045971 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 106.607317073 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614503816794 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9033048471 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8235294118 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29411764706 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153069201019 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516075512522 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450623542544 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100134527253 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200001364554 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 40.7170731707 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.