The given bar chart represents the budget between three different countries ( The US , Europe , Asia ) spent on 5 kinds of Entertainment( cinema , video , music , publishing and television ) over a half decade .
In Total , The Americans spent a lot on entertainment . The sum of money spent on publishing was substantially high among the all 3 countries over the period . The least amount of budget was noted on cinema's , video's and music's . whereas the television was moderately contributed.
On the year 1995,The united states expenditure towards entertainment was maximum with the value of 184 billion dollars . On contrast , The Asian and Europe people used minimum cost of finance ( 67 billion $ AND 97 Billion $ respectively ) .
Over a span of 5 years ,Despite of increase in the overall amount on entertainment by all 3 countries , American persisted high . The quantity of money used for entertainment increased to 110 billion$ by Asian people , while it hits 184 billion $ by Europeans and claimed to 257 billion $ by Americans in 2000. However , It is noticed that , Americans tends to spend a larger amount for entertainment when compared to Asians and Europeans .
Hereby , I conclude by saying though there is a notable gradual increasing trend among each country towards entertainment , The United states budget is maximum while comparing with Asia and Europe .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30841121495 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05714246866 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7463617118 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.272727273 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 1.69756097561 2003% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161947047037 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705245035856 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444739432597 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904642012727 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526955063867 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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