The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa

Essay topics:

The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa.

The graph depicts the weather conditions of a particular region of East Africa. The striking feature of the chart is the numerous differences in the weather conditions in the whole year.

At a fleeting glance, it is clearly observed that from January onwards temperature surged till march by 1.5% meanwhile rainfall also started. However, precipitation, as well as temperature, was highest recorded in the month of March-April. Afterward, climatic situation collapsed and became moderate in the mid of the year.

Furthermore, there was not at all consistency in both meteorologies. There was a sudden elevation in the rainfall during the last third and second month of the year whereas the climate is also warm in these months as contrasted to the earlier months. Despite this, the concerned conditions again fall in the last month of a year.

Overall, the climate was freezing and chilly in February and July, on the contrary, burning in February.

Votes
Average: 8.1 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
... precipitation, as well as temperature, was highest recorded in the month of March-April. A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, second, so, third, well, whereas, while, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23376623377 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94633510281 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616883116883 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9752996698 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5555555556 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 5.23603664747 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160156556199 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608094274712 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703864695241 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831927749931 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614992110048 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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