The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa.
The line graph and bar chart show information about the standard monthly raindrop and temperature for one country in East Africa.
At the first glance it is clear that the highest rainfall was about above 250 Millimeters in April, but the march, temperature was highest about 23.5 Celsius. Conversely, the lowest rainfall was in July about under 50 Millimeters and also lowest temperature was about 20.5 Celsius in East Africa.
Rainfall in East Africa, both of month(January and February) were remaining the same millimeters under 50. Yet the march was huge risen about nearly 100 millimeters. And also the month of April was dramatically peaked about above 250 millimeters and it had been highest point of raindrop. But the may was sharply declined about 150. Furthermore, the rainfall remained same dropped all of these month (June to September). In addition, the month of October and November were risen quietly same and December was slightly fall.
On the other hand of temperature, January was about 22.5 Celsius and it was quietly increased about 23.5 march and it had been highest point of temperature. But this temperature was tremendously fall in July about 20.5 and it had been lowest point. Before July, all of these month(April to June) Were gradually decreased from March. After July, the temperature slowly increased from August to September. In addition, October to November were a boom and December was dive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...250 Millimeters in April, but the march, temperature was highest about 23.5 Celsi...
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Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... highest about 23.5 Celsius. Conversely, the lowest rainfall was in July about un...
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Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'also the lowest'.
Suggestion: also the lowest
... in July about under 50 Millimeters and also lowest temperature was about 20.5 Celsius in E...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...frica, both of monthJanuary and February were remaining the same millimeters un...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...onthJanuary and February were remaining the same millimeters under 50. Yet the ...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...y and February were remaining the same millimeters under 50. Yet the march was ...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'been the highest'.
Suggestion: been the highest
... about above 250 millimeters and it had been highest point of raindrop. But the may was shar...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this month' or 'these months'?
Suggestion: this month; these months
...e rainfall remained same dropped all of these month June to September. In addition, the mo...
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Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...and November were risen quietly same and December was slightly fall. On the othe...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fallen'.
Suggestion: fallen
...quietly same and December was slightly fall. On the other hand of temperature, Ja...
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Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...fall. On the other hand of temperature, January was about 22.5 Celsius and it wa...
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Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'been the highest'.
Suggestion: been the highest
...y increased about 23.5 march and it had been highest point of temperature. But this temperat...
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Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fallen'.
Suggestion: fallen
.... But this temperature was tremendously fall in July about 20.5 and it had been lowe...
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Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'been the lowest'.
Suggestion: been the lowest
...usly fall in July about 20.5 and it had been lowest point. Before July, all of these monthA...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, furthermore, may, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11587982833 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69592813592 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484978540773 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0701920061 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1428571429 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181252700072 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772014373838 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126590179613 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186042198295 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187137391765 0.0819641961636 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.