The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the

Essay topics:

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons.

The given charts illustrate the maximum and minimum temperatures and how many average raining days in 12 months in 2 cities in Australia.

Overall, the amount of precipitation in Brisbans concentrates in the first 4 months of the year, while the average number of raining days in Canberra is the highest in 3 summer months. In addition, the city Canberra consistently has the lowest temperatures throughout the year.

The number of days with rainfall in Brisbans is 13 days in January, after which it reaches its peak of 14 days in the next 2 months. The figure for Brisbans gradually declines to about 7 days with rain in June and keeps unchangeable during the summer and autumn months before rising to 12 days in December. Additionally, the precipitation of Canberra is recorded in around 7 days at the beginning of the year, which then is nearly stable until May, before sharply climbing to 10 days from June to August. The figure for the city Canberra then fluctuates in the 4 final months, which ends with the equal days to the beginning’s.

30 degree Celsius in February is the highest temperatures in Brisbans in the year, which then fairly dramatically drops to slightly over 20 degree and gradually increases throughout the rest months. Similarly, the maximum temperature in January in Canberra is around 27 degree, after which it witnesses a sharp fall by 16 degree in July and a fast increase in the highest temperatures of the final 5 months. In addition, the minimum temperature of Brisbans and Canberra in January is about 21 and 13 degree Celsius respectively, followed by a decline in summer and autumn months and a rise to approximately 20 and 12 degree in December.

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Average: 8.9 (4 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, similarly, then, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 33.7804878049 184% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 288.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88541666667 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93445098854 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434027777778 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.4561213815 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.7 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243930070384 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114105441659 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594255909599 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173367636008 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566464575672 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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