The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart illustrates the energy consumed by America since 1980 and predicts its consumption until 2030.

Overall, it can be seen that the consumptions of six different types of energy gradually increase over the period, with the exception of hydropower which only remains stable.

According to the graph, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower energy were all equal in 1980 at around 4 quadrillion units. On the other hand, petrol and oil was the most consumed energy with 35 quadrillion units, followed by coal and natural gas with 20 and 16 quadrillion units respectively.

Throughout the history, from 1980 to 2010, it is clear that the three least used energy still remained stable and only increased slightly by about one to three quadrillion units. At the same time, the top three energy consumptions fluctuated significantly, reaching the amount that was higher than the initial points.

It is projected that the consumption of nuclear, solar and hydropower will continue to remain at the same place until 2030, while petrol and oil, coal are predicted to rise dramatically, reaching its peak of 47 and 30 quadrillion units in 2030 accordingly. However, natural gas predictions is to remain unchanged at around 23 quadrillion units

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...rgy gradually increase over the period, with the exception of hydropower which only remains stable. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: CONTINUE_TO_REMAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'remain'.
Suggestion: remain
...n of nuclear, solar and hydropower will continue to remain at the same place until 2030, while pet...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, so, still, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27135678392 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9009994107 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587939698492 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.251865637 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.125 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155965254579 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760180105596 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505665971452 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993799365347 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466644443542 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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