The graph below gives information about total oil use of 4 main consumers from 2009 to 2030

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The graph below gives information about total oil use of 4 main consumers from 2009 to 2030

The given line graph illustrates the consumption of oil used per day by 4 main purchasers between 2009 and 2030.

Overall, the oil usage in US and Western Europe and Japan is predicted to decline, in contrast to the expected increase in China and the Middle East. In details, US is staying unchanged as the largest consumer during the span of time.

It is vividly shown that US is anticipated to experience the most significant changes in comparison with others areas. In 2009, US used roughly 10 million barrels per day. After remaining stable there in the 5-year period, the amount of oil use in this country is predicted to fall sharply to above 4 million barrels in 2030. Likewise, Western Europe and Japan are expected to witness a negligibly reduction of 2 million barrels in the end.

In contrast, China and the Middle East show an opposite trend. In details, a slight rise of approximately 2 million barrels is anticipated in both figures for these two areas, overtaking the amount of oil consumption in Western Europe and Japan.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('negligibly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('reduction') instead of another adjective.
...urope and Japan are expected to witness a negligibly reduction of 2 million barrels in the end. In ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, so, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86033519553 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70371438413 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6037765074 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162539025285 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693838022503 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871633825013 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11786463264 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101623155219 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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