The graph below shows the alcohol-related deaths in 7 different countries and the average beer consumption in 2005.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the description of the correlation of the table that follows.
The table shows the alcohol related deaths and the beer consumption of people for the year 2005 in 7 countries. As is presented in the table, the Czech Republic has the highest number of people who dead because of alcohol among 7 countries. And in general, more men died in alcohol related problem than female.
In all 7 countries, more men died by drinking alcohol than women, and it seems there is a connection between the per capita beer consumption with the death from alcohol related problems. About 132 liters of beers were consumed per capita in 2002 in Czech Republic, which might was the biggest reason for why there were highest number of alcohol related deaths in this country in 2005 (about 1369000). Followed by it was Germany, which ranked in the second position both in beers consumption and the number of deaths (about 1185000). Lithuanian population drank the comparatively fewer liter of beers on an average and that caused a least number of people (about 125000) who died for alcohol related problem. The special one was Canada, whose people consumed the least liters of beers (86 per capita) but also had 580000 number of people in all died by alcohol. The other countries basically conformity the rule that more beer consumed, more people died by it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a dead'.
Suggestion: who is a dead
...public has the highest number of people who dead because of alcohol among 7 countries. A...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'were the highest'.
Suggestion: were the highest
...ht was the biggest reason for why there were highest number of alcohol related deaths in thi...
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Line 5, column 627, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... of beers on an average and that caused a least number of people about 125000 who...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83486238532 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39620400218 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4106904762 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.111111111 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234040819688 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121109628042 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915897813808 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210451964822 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192499441468 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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