Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.
Do you agree or disagree with the above notion?
To be honest, sometimes it's not incomprehensible that people don't want to pay taxes. In some countries, a large amount of money has to be paid by tax-payers which cause high hostility towards government. Some people tend to keep money and refuse to pay the tax. From my perspective, I believe paying taxes is a compulsory obligation for a citizen. And in general, most of taxes money has been used to people at last.
First of all, nearly all the infrastructures are built by government or its finance. The government needs to ensure their citizens live in a healthy and stable society which required houses, schools, hospitals and etc. So mostly, tax payer money is invested in electricity facility, education facility or transportation aspect. Also, these money has push the urbanization of city and provide more job positions toward workers.
Secondly, if everyone does not pay taxes, it will bring their country’s finance to the verge of bankruptcy. And to the worst, the country will not be able to pay a large number of police to protect our security and maintain huge military expenditures. Obviously, in such society, individual will have to face various inconveniences and their life security is not guaranteed. In a long-term, the country will become unstable and crime rates will rise, which badly influence people’s living.
To conclude, considering the facilities being provided, or the infrastructure being built and used, I favor that every citizens should pay the taxes. Because only adequate tax revenue can maintain the stability of the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...es its not incomprehensible that people dont want to pay taxes. In some countries, a...
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...ich required houses, schools, hospitals and etc. So mostly, tax payer money is invested ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...acility or transportation aspect. Also, these money has push the urbanization of city and p...
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Suggestion: many; numerous
...st, the country will not be able to pay a large number of police to protect our security and main...
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Line 13, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...at every citizens should pay the taxes. Because only adequate tax revenue can maintain ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23137254902 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03987089711 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63137254902 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7044732 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.9333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195473890383 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068383880986 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651138268575 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107929154123 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724107428743 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.