The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

The line graph compares how much money was spent on books in 4 different countries from 1995 to 2005. Units are measured in millions of US dollars.

Overall, the spending on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria increased dramatically over the period. It is also noticeable that Germany spent the most on books among other countries.

In 1995, Germany spent at $80 million on books, which was by far the highest spending and the figure fluctuated slightly in the succeeding 4 years, before increasing to reach a high of just under $100 million in 2005. France's spending started at nearly $60 in 1995, after which the number rose steadily to peak at just under $80 million in 2005.

Between 1995 and 2003, the amount of money spent on reading materials in Italy hovered from nearly $50 million to just below $60 million, before climbing to around $70 million in the final year. Austria had the lowest spending from 1995 to 2001 between almost $30 million and $40 million but went up significantly and overtook Italy to become the third highest spender on books at approximately $70 million in 2005.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...995 to 2001 between almost 0 million and 0 million but went up significantly and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78421052632 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54297685832 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536842105263 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6781733551 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.625 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335209032775 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146702004065 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925041861499 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206363862925 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672682558935 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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