The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The line graph illustrates the average of CO2 emissions per person of 4 difference Western countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall, it is clear that the amount of CO2 emissions in metric tonnes of Italy and Portugal increased over the period, while CO2 emitted from other countries fell.
In 1967, the average of CO2 emissions of Portugal was only below 2 metric tonnes. In the following decades, it increased gradually, which rose to over 5 metric tonnes in 1997 and increased slightly in 10-year later although it was still less than 6 metric tonnes. CO2 was produced from Italy also increased, from over 4 metric tonnes in 1967 to almost 8 metric tonnes by the 1997, then this figure was remained steady this amount to 2007, and always higher than that of Portugal 2 metric tonnes approximately 2 metric tonnes. Although, the average of CO2 of Portugal decreased, this is the country emitted the highest CO2 on average over the period.
The figure for Sweden was over 8 metric tonnes in 1967s and then reached its highest peak over 40-year period, over 10 metric tonnes. By contrast, this fell sharply to equivalent the amount of CO2 of Portugal produced, less than 6 metric tonnes. United Kingdom is the highest country that emitted CO2, over 10 metric tonnes. However, there was a gradual decline in the average CO2 emissions to below 9 metric tonnes.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83690987124 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43976222627 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437768240343 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8276442784 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.7 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236100083469 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144908354265 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104055633623 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196824945112 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837434202999 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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