The illustration gives information about how the uk economy was built up by different fields such as agriculture, manufacturing, and business and finance in the 20th century. it is noticeable that agriculture and manufacturing was reducing with each year , while business and financial was continuously increasing.
we can see from the data that the development of these fields were completely opposite of each other . Firstly, the most developed sector from the UK economy was agriculture in1900 and 1950 with 50% and 55% respectively. However, it was considerably less increased in the 1975s period and 2000 with over 10% and near 5% respectively. Secondly, manufacturing was reduced each period from near 50% (1900) to near 20 %( 2000), while there are only 5% of business and financial in 1900 from the contribution of three main ingredients. Significantly more B&F was developing than any sectors climbed from 10%(1950) to near 40% in 2000. Furthermore, it would continuously spread in the next few years. B&F should be more remarkable than because a country wants to develop, B&F need to be expanded
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21468926554 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17542162069 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638418079096 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3476623783 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.555555556 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14239080206 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056593204984 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057770838242 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125577889253 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269744311348 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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