The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The graph shows the amount of electricity needed in England during typical days in winter and summer while the pie chart shows the use of electricity in an average England home. Overall, it’s obvious that the daily demand for electricity in winter is always higher than in summer at each period of time, and heating rooms and heating water use the most electric energy.
Starting with the line graph, at 0:00, the need of electricity in winter(36000 units) was twice larger than in summer(18000 units). In winter, after the amount of electricity needed rises to 40000 units at 3 o’clock, it experiences an obvious decrease, bottoming out at 30000 units at 7 a.m. Before it falls quickly to the original figure at 24:00, it increases steadily to the peak at 45000 units at 21 o’clock although there is no change at between 12 o’clock and 18 o’clock. By contrast, the quantities of electricity in summer first remain stable until 9 o’clock and then increase steadily to 20000 units at 14:00. After declining in the following two hours, they begin to grow slightly to 20000 units at 22 o’clock, followed by a small drop to the original data at 24:00.
Turning now to the pie chart, it can be easily seen that heating rooms and heating water consume the largest part of electricity, at 52.5%, which is three times larger than the figure for ovens, kettles and washing machines, at 17.5%. However, the percentage of lighting TV and radio is the smallest, equal to the percentage of vacuum cleaners, food mixtures and electric tools (15%).
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...is always higher than in summer at each period of time, and heating rooms and heating water us...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74206583544 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8130167518 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.625 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254279485493 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153111699906 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.222569263735 0.0843802449381 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246781974421 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.254116864506 0.0819641961636 310% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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