the graph below shows the female unemployment rates in each country of United Kingdom in the years 2013 to 2014.
The given bar chart represents information about the percentage of unemployed women in some countries of the United Kingdom between 2013 and 2014. Overall trend shows the declination of the rate from 2013 to 2014 in most of the country, except for Scotland where is the enhancement happen.
According to the graph, it is clear that most of country surveyed has degradation in the female who-do-not-work rate. In the first year, England started the percentage at 6.8 % and been the highest number both of the 2 years measured. In other hand, Wales and Northeast Ireland began it is graph at 5.4 and 5.6 percent, respectively. All of the countries mentioned before then continued to dropped both slightly and dramatically to 6.5, 5, and 4.6, orderly.
On the contrary, Scotland demonstrates the dissimilar trend with another country. Meanwhile the other illustrates the decrease, Scotland unemployed women rate increase from 6.1 % in 2013 to 6.7 % in 2014. Even though the latter was not the peaks of graph generally, it is sure the highest rate of the second years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...h at 5.4 and 5.6 percent, respectively. All of the countries mentioned before then continu...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
... dissimilar trend with another country. Meanwhile the other illustrates the decrease, Sco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, then, while, except for, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06818181818 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8503886066 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619318181818 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.9996751109 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.1111111111 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368796623723 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119420683778 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082692845592 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21910716014 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659712994571 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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