the bar chart below show the participation of children in selected leisure activities.
The bar graph represents information about the participation percentage of children by 5 to 14 years old that differentiate by gender in some distinct chosen spare time activities in Australia. In general, the boys participation in every activities selected always higher than girls, except for the art and craft that's lower and watching TV/video that's equal.
According to the chart, it is clear that both boys and girls participated more in watching TV or video. In the case of girls, it rose the highest participant by 95%, in contrast, skateboard has the lowest rate by 30%. Meanwhile bike riding, electronic computer games, art and craft reached 60, 60, and 55 percent, respectively.
In other hand, similar with the girls, percentage of boys in watching TV/video also went up to the peaks which is 95% , but the dissimilarity are in the activity that has the fewest participant which is art and craft that only about 30%. Then electronic computer games got 80% followed by bike riding and skateboarding at 70 and 40 percent orderly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to spare'
Suggestion: to spare
...tiate by gender in some distinct chosen spare time activities in Australia. In genera...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'boys'' or 'boy's'?
Suggestion: boys'; boy's
...ctivities in Australia. In general, the boys participation in every activities selec...
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Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'selected'.
Suggestion: always selected
... boys participation in every activities selected always higher than girls, except for the art a...
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Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...han girls, except for the art and craft thats lower and watching TV/video thats equal...
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Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...craft thats lower and watching TV/video thats equal. According to the chart, it i...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
... skateboard has the lowest rate by 30%. Meanwhile bike riding, electronic computer games,...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o also went up to the peaks which is 95% , but the dissimilarity are in the activi...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...30%. Then electronic computer games got 80% followed by bike riding and skateboa...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, except for, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04624277457 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92700308739 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624277456647 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.360888228 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127447349614 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578047206554 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474030940226 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863093609873 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482232717278 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.