The graph below shows the number of passengers using three railway networks from 1950 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is the bar chart delineating the figure of people using three distinct rail networks namely, Great Western, Northern and Light Rail network over a 60-year phase, commencing from 1950.
It is conspicuous that there was a drastic fluctuation in the numbers of passengers of Great Western and Northern while the Light Rail network had a much slower surge. Furthermore, the Light Rail network had been the least used one over the years.
In terms of the figure of people who used the Northern network, it slumped to its lowest number about 245 million in 1970 from exactly 300 million in the first given years. After that, it brought a leaping period and reached a zenith of roughly 315 million surveyed in the last 20 years. Sentence ( by far the most popular). When it comes to that figure of Great Western, beginning with 250 million in the 1950s, it then was followed by a drastic volatility with a zenith of 315 million reached in 1995 before hitting 300 million in the last year.
Regarding the figure of Light Rail network’s users, it appeared 15 years later than 2 aforementioned networks, with about 5 million reported in the 1965s, it gave a non-stop surge and hit a peak of approximately 25 million in the last 15-year phase.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, regarding, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74537037037 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52924848682 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546296296296 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3502011702 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.125 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110043205329 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531831023592 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487316287803 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790573779709 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414967146401 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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