the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the line graph gives information about the amount of people who visited Caribbean island by two ways where people stayed on from the year 2010 to 2017, for 7 years.
overall, it is clear that the number of all the travelers who stayed on island are higher than those who stayed on cruise ships, except following 2 years, 2016 and 2017. also, one significant figure on visitors staying on island category had the highest record as much as 4 times at 1.5 millions of population over the period shown.
in the year 2010, nearly 0.7 millions of travelers stayed on cruise while who stayed on island are just around 0.3 millions, half amount of the former group. until the year 2015, more people choose the island to stay rather than cruise ships. especially in 2012 and 2013, the number of people increased quadrupled compared with those who stayed on ships. meanwhile, from 2013 to 2015, figure of the line graph indicated visitors stayed in island is plateaued, by contrast other group's figure constantly increased. from the year 2016, finally people prefer to stay on ships than land. is saw at 1.5 millions of visitors while people who likely to stay on land is at around 1.3 millions.
on the other hand, whole population of travelers to Caribbean island gradually showed upward trend through 7 years. there is more than threefold increase of population from the beginning to the end, only 1 million of people to 2.5 million of it respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.796 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39833608988 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8736104896 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114989685039 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520063151985 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588421628005 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980351020289 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665577490055 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.