The graph below shows the percentage of population in cities since 1970s with projection to 2030.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The line graph illustrates the changes in the proportion of the urban population in four different countries, namely the USA, Korea, China, and India in the 1970s and the prediction for 2030.
Overall, it can be seen that all four nations have exhibited an upswing trend during the last 40 years starting in 1970, and the projected figures will increase over the remaining years. Also noteworthy is the fact that the urban populations of the USA and Korea are significantly higher than in other countries.
In 1970, both the proportions of city dwellers in China and India were starting at 20%. Then, the number of these people sustained a period of stability for 20 years. After that, China experienced a dramatic increase of approximately 60% in 2010 and it will be almost 70 percent in 2030. Similarly, the percentage of Indians living in cities has increased rapidly over the last decade and will gradually reach a peak of nearly 40% at the end of the period.
Subsequently, starting at a nearly quadruple point compared with China and India in 1970, the number of Americans soared for 40 years, jumping to 90%. The same as the trend seen in the USA, but quite dramatic, starting at 40% in Korea, where the figure has rocketed to 85%, narrowing the gap between two nations. In 2030, the proportion of metropolitan citizens in Korea is predicted to equal that of the USA, at 90%, respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87916666667 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81809320384 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570833333333 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.7182100536 43.030603864 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.375 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917680971278 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038313014347 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024423434039 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624414983582 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296992213314 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.