The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates the population change in Columbia, Yamhill, Washington between the time period of 1940 and 2000.

Overall, among all three Washington has the highest population. Furthermore, the population change of Yamhill and Columbia is similar. However Columbia has least population among other two countries.

In 1940, the population of Columbia is around 25,000 this is compared with Yamhill which has a population of 32,000 and Washington with a population of 75,000 at that time. In 1970, the population of Columbia slightly increased to 35,000 and similarly the population of Yamhill rose to 45,000. On the other hand, the population of Washington increased by 50,000 summing up to around 125000. In 2000 the population of Columbia was approximately around 75,000. Meanwhile, the population of Yamhill rose to be what the population of Washington was in 1940. Moreover the population change of Yamhill and Columbia is similar. However, the population of Washington rose sharply to 250,000.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, similarly, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00008218165 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3179027646 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147271762999 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812872013717 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520584047845 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140604090299 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606327414003 0.0819641961636 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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