The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

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The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

The line graph represents four various materials ("Paper and cardboard, Glass containers, Aluminium cans and Plastics"), which recycled in a particular country from 1982 to 2010. The units are in percentages from 0 to 90.

Overall, it is clearly seen that all materials show uptrend. However, paper and cardboard and glass containers, after a brief fluctuation, increased; whereas, aluminium cans ascended gradually over the period.

Almost 65% of paper and cardboard materials recycled in 1982 and it increased by 5% after four years. Subsequently, it declined by 5% and thereafter, it rose significantly to reach a peak of 80% in 1994. Then it descended gradually to reach 70% in 2010. Glass containers recycled 50% in 1982, but the recycling rate dropped by 10% till 1990; nevertheless, from 1990 tp 2010, it increased steadily to attain its highest at 60%.

On the other hand, aluminium cans and plastics, during the beginning years, did not recycle; nonetheless, their rate of recycling climbed to approximately 45% and 9% respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, then, whereas, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36144578313 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19009321662 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644578313253 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.3404903262 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 5.23603664747 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274372401791 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101086900629 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089995190867 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146983977725 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10540458313 0.0819641961636 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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