The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph compares the differences of life expentancy of the inhabitant in The US, Sweden and Japan over the period of 100 years.
Overall, the figures for people whose age is 65 and over rise constantly these different countries, however, the increase of Japanese is noticeable.
In 1940, the number of the aged in The US was highest nearly 10%, while Japan, whose percentage of old population was lowest at 5 %. In Sweden, its citizens was more or less 7%. 90 years later ( 2030), it is said that the quatity of aged - Japanese will overtake The US as the first place on chart.
From 1940 to 1980, the American and the Swedish increased continuously at 15% and 13% respectively. By contrast, the Japan's aged hit a low of around 3% and 4% and has a slight growth during the period of 35 years later. The old people in Sweden keeps growing for the rest of the period. During the last ten years, however gradually the aged of the America climb it only goes to the third prize in 2040. In contrast, the amount of Japan's old people rocket over 25% in 2040.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
..., the figures for people whose age is 65 and over rise constantly these different...
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...zens was more or less 7%. 90 years later 2030, it is said that the quatity of age...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, third, while, in contrast, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53886010363 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42296703048 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4692161901 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209322125317 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071531129938 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573755155801 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127717916925 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411072490984 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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