The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The graph illustrates the changes of the population aged 65 and over of three nations: Japan, Sweden and the USA between 1940 and 2040.
It is clear that the three countries have a gradual increased tendency from 1940 to 2040. In particular, from 1940 to 1980, while the population aged 65 and over of Japan decreased from 5% in 1940 to around 3% in 1960 and remained steady that level until 1980, that figures in USA and Sweden continuously went up from 9% and 7% in 1940 to 15% and 14% in 1980 respectively.
From 1980 to 2040, the proportion of people were 65 and over 65 years-old in the USA and Sweden have fluctuated widely just under 20%, then were forecasted to peak at around 24% and 27% in 2024 respectively. Meanwhile, the proportion in Japan has rocketed from 3% to 7 times in 2040.
In conclusion, there is an upward trend in the percentage of elderly citizens in all three countries during the one century period. Japan has remained stable from 1940 to 2000, before soaring to the peak in 2040. By contrast, the population aged more than 65 in Sweden and USA has fluctuated, then was predicted to reach a peak in 2040.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, while, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54368932039 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58773836731 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490291262136 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2475603647 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332019030761 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162540116778 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116464285393 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246810222452 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120180821506 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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