Many countries invest money to prepare competitors to join top competitions like the Olympic Game and the World Cup. It is necessary to offer money to encourage children to exercise. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, more and more financial investments for athletics attending sporting competitions like the Olympic Game and World Cup were allocated by governments. Whether it is crucial to spending money to encourage children to exercise is a controversial issue. In my opinion, there are a lot of merits for investing money in international sporting game to stimulate social and human developments.
First, it is true that exercise is important to the physical and conscious development of children, but sometimes being neglected due to its invisible effects. That is the reason for investing in young athletics to represent the beauty of exercise and raise public awareness to encourage citizens to attend physical activities. It is obvious that the best physical outfit makes the best working performance which makes great contributions to social progress. In fact, employees will contribute the best superior and productive performances in healthy sharp.
Second, regular exercises will help individuals to enhance immune systems which leads to results of diminishing financial source allocated for healthcare service. Society will no longer have a heavy burden of taking care dwellers if citizens maintain their fitness by joining exercise classes. It will make significant contributions to social progress by increasing the quality of life with physical exercise. In order to get that such results, governments should give financial support for young athletics for stimulation.
In conclusion, investments for competitors to take part in international sporting competitions are necessary and important in order to motivate children into physical activities. By doing so can the youth maintain a dynamic and sustainable development and contributing to social prosperity as mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'spend'?
Suggestion: spend
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74812030075 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1728721977 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2727137279 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.615384615 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157093428991 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557211303734 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607570032863 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105209854904 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898406645673 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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