The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given line chart illustrates the alterations and differences in the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. There are three methods that customers used to transfer their inquiries: in person, by letter or email and by telephone.
In general, the research experienced a downward trend in customers choosing communication through phone, contrary to upward trend in customers using email, letter and face to face meeting.
The number of enquiries by letters and emails stood at 750 at the beginning, then slightly falling by 100 to 650 enquiries in Feb and maintained stable in Mar. After that, the research witnessed a constantly diminishing by 100 enquiries in Apr to 350, then plunge to 350 enquiries in May and maintained that number in Jun.
The number of enquiries received by phone experienced a decreasing from 850 to 800 enquiries in first 2 months of the years, contrary to a notable increasing by 200 to 1000 enquiries in Mar, following a levelling out in Apr. After that, a swift and significant growth was documented in customers communicating through phone by 400 to 1400 in May, before went to the peak at 1600 in Jun
In conclusion, while communication through phone and face to face experienced constant growth, enquiries by letter or email underwent diminishing over the first six months in 2011
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, then, while, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 33.7804878049 175% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03043478261 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98036739213 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9684525716 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.285714286 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8571428571 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186723200052 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103327463238 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132939403405 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114299879918 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101293662251 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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