People are now surrounded by advertising. This both affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, one of the most important fields that enterprises utilize to gain the competitive advantage and popularize their product is advertising. And the prevalence of advertisements has severely profound affected on people’s life and manner.
Fist, at the heart of the matter, companies tend to public information in advertisements which is beneficial for their business and overshadow those are harmful. People usually focus on given information in advertisements because companies make up that information to become the prime function and necessary for their needs, though sometimes it is not true. For example, medicine companies always emphasize bright side of their drug such as fast efficiency, affordable prices, non-experiment on animals and exaggerate to essential effects to people life. But, the most important thing they rarely mention in first place is side effects which were ignored or hidden with tiny letters in instruction.
Second, enterprises have manipulated customer’s behaviors by spreading advertisements that encouraged tendency or influences that superior for their business. For instance, smartphone producers can start the chain of advertisements that demonstrate how good a smartphone can straightforward connect with people without moving around. This tendency maybe convenient to individuals want to expanse their relationships but in the long term it will exert negative affect on people’s lives. They will depend on their phone for online relationships which are unreal and potential danger.
Inconclusion, advertisements are controlled by enterprises and mostly beneficial for commercial purpose. So that, people are affected and manipulated by advertising in the way of thinking leading to manifestly negative impaction on their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...in the long term it will exert negative affect on people's lives. They will depend o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94573643411 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35965808465 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5687307432 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.833333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181132577453 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753793956678 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793363554441 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129134114933 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037123728851 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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